What is this? 'Two miles behind it a jet of white steam was travelling from the left to the right of the picture.' It is a train, viewed across a valley, in Jude the Obscure (1895), and it is the only sentence offered there about this train. Flaubert is always described as the great cinematic novelist, the great novelist of detail, and indeed Flaubert has his own described train-steam too - similarly seen, in L'Education sentimentale, across fields, but 'stretched out in a horizontal line, like a gigantic ostrich feather whose tip kept blowing away'. But where Flaubert turns his train-steam into writing, flourishing his fine literary simile, Hardy, flirting with the pictorially gnomic, seems to want to resist that conversion; Hardy would like to preserve the visuality of the detail.

LRB 4 January 2007 | PDF Download